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megazver
Jul. 30th, 2014 02:24 pm (UTC)
7) CG Deadpool test footage. I’d happily watch this.


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burger_eater
Jul. 30th, 2014 02:45 pm (UTC)
I shouldn't be reading this before coffee.
megazver
Jul. 30th, 2014 04:33 pm (UTC)
Like I said, bit too LOL IM RANDOM for me. Could maybe work as a short film but I suspect it would be insufferable as a proper-length movie.
burger_eater
Jul. 30th, 2014 06:08 pm (UTC)
I'd be willing to give a feature length Deadpool a try.
lwe
Jul. 30th, 2014 04:16 pm (UTC)
Instructive? How?
lwe
Jul. 30th, 2014 04:29 pm (UTC)
And of course, you chose a day when the top entry is not an opening.
burger_eater
Jul. 30th, 2014 06:16 pm (UTC)
I know we talked about this over on Twitter, but I don't want to leave this without a response because I'd look like a big jerk.

I always, always screw up the start of my novels. I think maybe KING KHAN was the only one where I didn't throw out an initial attempt, but that was because I was following a careful outline. I have the same problem with short fiction, too.

Anyway, before I wrote the version of Child of Fire that sold, I made a conscious effort to study and analyze the way writers open their stories. I think it's instructive.

A couple of weeks back, I posted a similar link to a Fantasy Writer community on G+. I have no idea if people followed that link.
lwe
Jul. 30th, 2014 07:03 pm (UTC)
Okay. For me, openings are the easy part (obviously, since I have more than twenty of them lying around). It's endings that give me trouble.

I added another one to the blog, so it'd be at the top for anyone who follows the link.
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