A large duck (burger_eater) wrote,
A large duck
burger_eater

This is probably the wrong day to ask folks to read and comment on something, what with all the free stuff out there, but I'm submitting a horror script to the Nicholl Fellowship (against my better judgement[1]) and they request a short logline[2] on their application.

What do you think of this?

A desperate husband chains his unfaithful wife in the basement while he searches for the source and cure of her new-found vampirism.


Thanks!


[1] I had sworn off the competition two years ago when they dinged a script that I thought was the best I could do. I decided I was incompatible with the fellowship and swore I wouldn't bother with it again[3].

[2] For those who don't know, a "logline" is a one-sentence synopsis like the ones you'd find in a TV guide writeup.

[3] Other things I've sworn off: Mayonaisse, cheddar cheese, beer, masturbation[4], Star Trek, internet flame wars. Yeah.

[4] Just kidding about that one. I'm not *that* stupid.
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